I was on the lookout for a poetic experience that resonates deeply with the complexities of modern life, this is a gem I am happy I did not miss! This poem not only showcases your exceptional talent but also invites readers to explore themes that are both poignant and relatable. Like rivers & stuff. Great job!
What I loved most was the way you used simple language, yet managed to convey deep emotions. I could tell you put thought into every word, making it relatable and heartfelt without being overly complicated. Great job!
I read this and my first instinct is to tell you that no matter your ethnicity, gender or social class you are not second best. You have something only you can do it is no one else's job but yours. God created a path specifically for you. Ask for guidance and follow your hunches. Great poem!
This poem is extremely thought provoking. I had thoughts of many different things while reading it such as Native Americans, Ancient Egypt and the Frost poem "Lodged" which happens to be one of my favorites. Great job!
Who cares if he/she did not choose you? You can not live your life according to how other people feel about you. Find happiness inside yourself and you will not care enough to write a poem about it. You did a good job!
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