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Rated: E | (4.0)
You love watching petals dance aware of their final stance?

I love watching ass holes run when the petals stop playing games for fun.


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Review of The Bradbury  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (2.5)
Write 56 that are all good. I did. Too bad poetry is not accepted.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I didn't read this because you lost me at agreeing to do something you do not understand.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I was on the lookout for a poetic experience that resonates deeply with the complexities of modern life, this is a gem I am happy I did not miss! This poem not only showcases your exceptional talent but also invites readers to explore themes that are both poignant and relatable. Like rivers & stuff. Great job!

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Review of Source  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
What I loved most was the way you used simple language, yet managed to convey deep emotions. I could tell you put thought into every word, making it relatable and heartfelt without being overly complicated. Great job!
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Review of What is my name?  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I read this and my first instinct is to tell you that no matter your ethnicity, gender or social class you are not second best. You have something only you can do it is no one else's job but yours. God created a path specifically for you. Ask for guidance and follow your hunches. Great poem!
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Review of National Pink Day  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
What day is national pink day do tell?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is extremely thought provoking. I had thoughts of many different things while reading it such as Native Americans, Ancient Egypt and the Frost poem "Lodged" which happens to be one of my favorites. Great job!
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Review of The Black Skull  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think that this is a great first poem. A little morbid but it is good!
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Review of Celtic Memories  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Who cares if he/she did not choose you? You can not live your life according to how other people feel about you. Find happiness inside yourself and you will not care enough to write a poem about it. You did a good job!
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