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Review of Pretty Red Leaves  
Review by LunaMoon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is possibly the best short story i have ever read. it's sad, and i just need to give it 5 stars.

it's beautiful.
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Review by LunaMoon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is the exact image of a "hero". i love how detailed and descriptive you make it, with describing all of those as "menacing" or "fearless". it adds to the vivid picture. your vocabulary is great too- i had to go google search what "percolating" meant.
this is great.
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Review by LunaMoon
Rated: E | (5.0)
wow this is really detailed! i did not expect so much information on characters. normally when i see one of these it goes something like "name, age, height, hair color" but this includes other important information!

good job on character building
10/10
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