As I read this, I felt like I was there with you, watching your Grandkids. You do a great job describing the setting, the puppy, the boys, and your emotions. I am not a Grandmother (or even a mother yet), but your writing let me feel like I knew what it felt like anyway. I love your comparison of your boys' fitness levels to that of Olympic athletes! I can tell how much you value country life, and how healthy it has been for the boys. I laughed when I read about feeding them 8 meals a day: you're a perfect Grandma. I think you have excellent voice. One minor comment, I'd like to hear more about the boys log rolling adventures, and I was unclear as to who the "cousins" were. Otherwise the story is wonderful and entertaining. I look forward to reading more from you!
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