Very impressive story Davy, you are obviously an accomplished writer, and I can't pick-out any real flaws in your story. I particularly like the central theme of " trick or treating, " which envoke memories of one's childhood, as everyone reading( has-had, or is having a childhood),making it an excellent topic, for a short story.The only thing I didn't like is: how the focus of the story switched from being ,one, of a trip-back- into one's past, with the trick or treating,then ,suddenly,to one of horror and tragedy, and as I am personally not a fan of horror, or gruesome tales,this didn't appeal to me. But I acknowledge your skill as a writer, and rate this story 5 stars as is shown, because to me personal taste dosen't come into it:If something is good, then it's good, and this is superb, writing. Well done! Please, can you take a look at my porfolio? As I am a fledgling writer, and any advice you could give me would be gratefully received, and heartily accepted. Congrats again. GR Closey
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