you certainly have a way with words, you lucky writer. this story is so entertaining, and will hold your interest until the end. too bad it had to end.
the words so described that dog , that in my mind I could see him, and his face. I would not change a thing in this read. its perfect to me. thank you for sharing your wonderful wit and a writers ability to hold our attention till the end. fellow writer, lucky01
i enjoyed reading this piece of your work,, so well written. the imagery was very good and i liked the ending. you have a way with words that lets you pour it out into a story. i write poetry but do enjoy reading all types of writing. i will read more of your work. thanks....lucky01
this is really an entertaining piece of work. i enjoyed reading it very much. i read it through three times and got a laugh each time. i will go and read more of your work. you certainly have a way with words!! thanks,,,, lucky01
one of the better free verse i have read in a long time. i really enjoyed this work. you have a talent in the way the words come to you. i can imagine how emotional this was for you. you came through very well. thanks, and Write On !!!
Now I really liked this story. Y ou have quite a way with words. I like scarey tales, stephen king being my fave author. You said predictable,maybe, but I kept reading till the end. Teddy bears and clowns have always been creepy!! Write
on... I would like to read more of this. Thank you for sharing this piece. lucky
Very well written, and what a surprise ending. I really enjoyed your piece. I love how you waited until the end to disclose the subject of your curiosity. very nice.
lucky
Cute!!! I too have recieved spam in my email. It's annoying, to say the least.
well written and I really like your style and use of words. I see that ads for the men are annoying but the one for women is a different story. Its still a cute piece and I enjoyed reading it.
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