I first want to say...I believe you absolutely. There are some scary people, places, and things, with frightening stories or true happenings attached. Been there done that...didn't like it much; and I can tell you with all certainty that I never, ever want to go that road again. God bless you folks...your instinct that Dewey is still watching out for you is probably 100% true.
You are a good writer. This was really interesting. Is this a single piece, or does this continue, or part of an existing story? Either way, I repeat, you are a good writer.
I so enjoyed this story. It was fun to read. Absolutely LOVE suck monster! Grandpa was a funny character too. Eve sounded wistful sweet and lovely. And "kid", otherwise known as our hero was perfect. I laughed out loud at the line: He says that's a huge "son of a fish"!!!
You are a funny and talented writer. I hope to read you again.
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