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Review of Ruby's Diamond  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very positive and uplifting story. Good job with showing and not telling!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really love how you captured both the unity and individual significance of the voices in a cheering crowd. One can feel and imagine the energy of a concert, and the euphoria that such experience creates. Great job!
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Review of In Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This story so carefully carried me along with its descriptive words and phrases that made me experience each moment with Matt. I was completely unprepared for the shocking end. I expected that somehow I would find out why Matt's best friend and his wife were arguing downstairs. But then the author took me completely by surprise (in a good way). Great read!
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