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Review Style
I can't really say what my review style is at this point since I will be reviewing all types of genres.
I'm good at...
Romance,Drama,Crime,Spiritual and thrillers.
Favorite Genres
Romance/Love, Dramas and Physcological Thrillers and Spiritual
Least Favorite Genres
Sci-Fi
Favorite Item Types
Articles,Short Stories,Novels
Least Favorite Item Types
Some Poetry
I will not review...
Sexual Content of any kind.
Public Reviews
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Review by Prosperous Pen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My Review of "The Write Muse - Chapter I" Open in new Window.
Hey Anujmathur, Prosperous Pen just finished reading your first chapter of The Write Muse. First of all I'd like to say I am a big fan of comedy! I enjoyed this first chapter! The Search was very funny!
Please note that this review represents my views as a reader and is not meant to offend in any manner.

*Clapper* Plot *Clapper*
This is a story about a writer who is writing a novel about the life of a chef! His search for a chef begins and he finds out his search has led him into landing new job working in the kitchen helping the chef! Now this is where things get a little strange for Vikram. The chef shows him around the kitchen not anything out of the ordinary until the chef wants to introduce him to someone else and to his surprise he meets an alien! Thus the plot thickens.......

*Person* Character *Person*
There are 3 main characters: Vikram (The Writer) Caesar (The Restaurant Owner)
and Morphy (The Alien)


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No errors! Very well written!


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My Favorites
This was hilarious!
“You want to hire a ‘Grandioso’ chef- one who is sought after by the biggest restaurateurs in the business, for some lousy two-bit book? It’s preposterous!”
“I hope you have the requisite experience for the position?” the manager asked him after the preliminaries were complete.
“I can boil eggs.” Vikram ventured.
“You’ve studied cooking at college, of course?”
“I boiled eggs when I was at college.” replied Vikram.

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My Thoughts:
I thought this chapter was very funny! and it keeps you guessing as to what is going happen next! I'll describe this as a comedy written with a Sci-FY twist! A very enjoyable read! Keep up the great work!


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Review of Wrong  Open in new Window.
Review by Prosperous Pen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Review of "Wrong"
Hello Harley, Welcome to WDC! Prosperous Pen here and I am reviewing your short story. I am also a newbie! Please note that this review represents my views as a reader and is not meant to offend in any manner.

First of all I loved the story! You had me hooked with the title! and at the beginning when you said, "My head hurts"! I felt her pain and could relate to her very well! The story was so similar to my own relationship I ended recently.

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This story is about how her boyfriend is verbally abusive to her non-stop and she decides she is not going to be cowardly anymore and finally stand up for herself on New Year's Eve!

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There was only one grammatical error in the following sentence: In ten minute it will be a brand new year. It should be minutes instead of minute.

*Gold* Favorites and Not-so-favorites *Gold*
My favorite:
“Please, stop. And please leave.”

“What? You can’t just kick me out. We’re not done talking about this.”

“Actually, we are. And yes I can. In ten minute it will be a brand new year. And I want to go into that as myself. Not this kicked puppy I've found myself acting like when you’re in the room. For this year, I’m just going to be me, good and bad. And unfortunately, I don’t think there’s any room for you in that resolution.”

*Thought2* Other thoughts and Suggestions *Thought2*
My thoughts: Great Job! This story kept my attention from beginning to end! *Delight*
My Suggestions: Keep writing more great reads like this!*Delight*




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