This was a very well written story, It pulled me in, and I felt every emotion. I even almost felt it when the Kid hit the ground. You gave me a very vivid picture of everything in the story. Great job!
Oh my goodness I love it! You said all the things that are in my heart, the things that I want to be for that special guy. Oh my gosh, this is wonderful! I LOVE it! Keep up the good work!
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