Hi Jake, this poem has interested me greatly. I haven't quite her anything like this before, but i do love this poem. In my opinion, it is fine the way it is and you don't need to change it. Thank you for posting up this poem !
hello, i have read some of your poems and i have to say they are interesting. although i would recommend for you to be just a little more indepth in what you write. overall, i like what you write. It is simplistic and thoughtful
hello, I like your poem, but I'd recommend for you to look it over and correct your spelling mistakes. Also, it may help tp capitalize your I's. Overall,i like how your poem is about the nture around you,
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