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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I loved this. It had a great message to it. The line "Looking into your eyes my heart skipped a beat" was my favorite because it sounds so nice. I wouldnt change a thing.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very well written. It is a little nasty but it held everyone's attention so its perfect. I liked you word choices. The line that said, "Croaking a final goodnight before slipping between sweet cheeks" was my favorite because i found it pretty funny.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was an amazing poem. It's very inspirational. More poeple should read this and take notes. Its very nice. You used great words!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very inspirational! i love it. This should make it to the white house. Its honestly amazing. You should write more stuff like this.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this poem. It was short, sweet, and to the point. Theres nothing else to really say about it. I wouldnt change a thing.
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Review by Lourtney Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Overall it was a good poem. Your words got a little confusing at times. The last part threw me for a loop because i was thinking about a heart break and the last line said because of you. I am dead. That was a good metaphor but it caught me off guard. My favorite line was i locked my heart in a box it just sounded kind of catchy.
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