First of all, I have to say that I really enjoy this storyline so far, not just for the smut, but for the story and the events that transpire too. Each character has a different and distinct personality that makes them quite enjoyable and likable, and the interaction between them is entertaining, making me wonder how their relationship will develop over time.
Overall, the grammar and syntax in this story has been nearly impeccable, to the point where you can easily overlook the small errors, making it easy to read.
The setting of the story is what intrigues me the most. While it is all fictional, the idea of aliens suddenly coming down on Earth both interests and scares me at the same time. Here, I am curious to how things will proceed as the story goes, while dreading what kind of things these anthropomorphic aliens, with their clearly superior technology than Earth, could do to our planet if the main protagonist doesn't cooperate to their liking.
I really wish I could contribute to this story, but compared to what Anderson and the other authors who contributed to this, my writing is pretty subpar, and I hope they or someone with equal talent can continue this, or any other branch of this story.
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