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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is a compelling start to a story. As one reads each line, one wants to learn more and see what happens next
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A scary but compelling view of an addict's world. "Dope Fiend" speaks in a very realistic way just what goes through the mind of a drug addict.
The broken relationships and the sheer terror of being on a collision course with utter destruction with no way of escape are senin Keaton Foster's words. Thanks for the read.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
At one time or another, just about every writing teacher around has suggested going to the airport to people watch.
You've followed that advice and done a fairly good job of sharing your observations.
Of course, we don't know about the man who just missed his plane, but...


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Other than mispellling "valiant," I think you did a good job. I can relate to your words.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I've always felt the same emotion and feel it all too often. Good job.


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice piece of work, although the longing at the beginning threw me off a bit.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
I loved the imagery on this poem. Your words took me to that air show and enabled me to feel what someone in that crowd would be seeing. I covered an unlimited hydroplane race on the Ohio River in Evansville, IN, for years for years and this poem took me back to a few of the airshows which were included as entertainment at those events.


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