I really like this son! The only thing wrong with it i noticed was that at one point night was spelled wrong but that happens to all of us when we type too fast and such. The song does a really good job of painting a picture of the scene for the listener/reader. I imagine when sung it sounds even better. Great writing, keep it up :)
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