The way this was written, with such a distinctive character in Spike's voice, made my heart do silly little loops. The story in itself is also cemented in harsh reality, and I am glad this popped up in my R & R. Very well done.
Skath, haiku is not my favourite subgenre of poetry, but the simplistic elegance in them is actually rather attractive for me. This little window into a moment that feels almost as though it had been paused by the verse is positively enchanting. I know I'm being awfully wordy over a twelve-word piece, but it truly is something to stand out. Nicely done.
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