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Rated: E | (4.0)
Not only did I learn something new in this writer, I actually found myself entranced by this write. I do not claim to any religion but I am a spiritual person to read this write, is like reading a small piece of serenity. The rhyme was, I almost want to say, expert. If you are not a person who rhymes often in poetry, then I applaud you. If you are a natural rhymer, I still applaud your ability to maintain a flow and have the reader focus on the write and not how awkward one's rhyme can make a flow.
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Review by loschivong Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a rather nicely written story. I believe it is a short story. I however would like to leave a detailed review on how I felt about this write. The beginning was slow but it was a good start, and it drew me in. You followed the unspoken rule of writers, and some are unable to do that. To draw a reader in within the first 10 seconds of its establishment. Writing a story of some sort which includes a mentally challenged character is often one that is avoided, tiptoed around and I think that with this story displaying this character in a positive light says something about the writer. It speaks of the fact that you are sensitive and involved as some form of individual in society.

The ending, was very simple, and I enjoyed this part the most. I think simplicity is one of the most useful tools writers can employ in their writings. And you used it well.

Happy writing!
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