This is a lovely short piece. I agree that many see these things as weakness, yet they are actually strengths to be reckoned with. It is direct and personal in a pleasant way.
Perhaps the last line could be thought to mean that "you" is mistaken that "I" is able to live without misbehaving, but I think any reader with sense can see what you really mean.
You have given us who are "weak" a voice. Thank you for that.
I wouldn't change much, but perhaps if I did anything it would be to add a few lines.
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