This is so light and airy when you begin the poem and I love how it segues into this darker tone but it still keeps the refreshing feeling it has in the beginning
This was very raw in emotion and I can identify with it very well. And I have a question.
Did you fall out of love or did you find your self worth and let that person go?
This is beautiful. I think the thing that really won me over was the fact that I can relate to the pain and that is really important when you want to connect emotionally to the ready. Overall I think its amazing!
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