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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading your poem very much. You did an excellent job of making me feel the emotions of your poem. It is very well written, and is sad yet hopeful at the same time. Perhaps you might consider switching your third stanza with the fifth, so it starts to sound more hopeful towards the ending. Your poem was an enjoyable read.
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