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Review of Summer Play  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A simple and beautiful piece of poetry. This haiku really makes me miss the summertime! It is very well written and refers back to nature as haikus should. You have done an excellent job in creating this and making your reader feel as though it is summer.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading your poem very much. You did an excellent job of making me feel the emotions of your poem. It is very well written, and is sad yet hopeful at the same time. Perhaps you might consider switching your third stanza with the fifth, so it starts to sound more hopeful towards the ending. Your poem was an enjoyable read.
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