I liked the title of the poem and how concise it was. I think the best poems are the shorter ones because you have more time to let the words really sink into your soul. Honestly, fire is one of my favorite things to write about, so I thought it was awesome that you had a poem surrounding that and sunrises/
I could feel the emotions inside this piece of writing. The part about the shadows and candles gave me shivers, but you always returned to the safety of a loved one. Lovely Job.
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