Well by the looks of your portfolio and this excellent breathtaking piece above you seem to be into the whole Romance genre. The funny thing is I love romance too but for some reason I can't write it.
I thought you did a great job. And I thought it was an excellent poem. It was very short and it rhymed. You should enter it in one of the poetry contest's on this site. I don't know any off the top of my head but if you have the chance try Poetry.com they have a good poetry contest.
Aw How sweet. I love it. I really could read it over and over again. The last part :
She looked completely unimpressed, as he had known she would. She grinned cheekily, “When you make perfect sense, daddy, that’s when I’ll stop loving you.”
He laughed and grabbed her around the waist, and then he swung her into his arms.
“By the way..." She cupped her hands over his ear and whispered, "that means never.”
That really touched me. I would love to read more of your writing.
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