Hi; quite an interesting metaphore about the concept of endlessness in life to start with. What I feel when I read this is that some people never want to say they have health, love and social concern and live on.Because they really want to. Second thing, it could be about somehone who really passed away. Third thing, could be about someone the writer appreciates and really wants to know about. More than this Yet the
stars too lie
as we might think
they still live
million years
after
they don't. The writer believes someone is telling white lies or little lies lay or lie term remains ambivalent
What a brave attempt at talking about a subject which is not that easy to talk about. It is when you set your mind to reach something or someone you are still in the waiting to reach or know about. For "that one day when it would they'd finally be right and able
A day that may soon be coming, or that'll never be seen."
In my opinion, if life and justice is fair enough to everyone this day should happen you should know about a long gone friend you should now about your admission to BA as a mature student,you should now of the vices of a lover you come to know was a swinger and can finaly let go of his grip.Indeed we are not mice caught in mazes without the right to be rescued nor informed.
I like this very long poem of the mermaid, I like the whole spirit it embodies step by step and the tragedy is sketched progressively, a sad tragedy and a beautiful poem
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