I am not one to judge but this story was not my style...now the use of dialouge and the tone was very good. it showed frustration and great amounts of displeasure from the womans point of view but other than that there really wasnt much there. You describe the clothing and where you obtained them... i found that to be very good in a description...but what were you wearing? the color the texture what kind of dress. there could have been more
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