This is a very curious interactive I have come across thus far. It has that weirdly popular shrinking motif that I have constantly come across, yet it does not have any erotic pleasures that most have written into their stories. That makes this an anomaly, how do you do it. I am impressed.
I'm not that much of a fan when a human is the predator of a story, however this story is a rare one concerning season four where humans can become Digimon rather than having a Digimon partner making it the most unique season of all. Also this story seems to have been forgotten which came to my attention and needed my say, if this can be built upon and have some variety that could include other predators even have one of the humans become their Digimon and then be the predator then it could have a better chance in getting more interesting which I hope it will.
Here is an interactive that makes one want to strive for more as it is sad that this one ended up being neglected with only a few chapters still I believe that any and all can be inspired to continue with others so that there does not have to be more good stories with great potential being left alone and we can all have an enjoyable read. And honestly this was a good idea I am just hoping that more good stories will not repeat the same fate as this one in the long run.
This was an early part of the site that as is could have used some work as it is short, a bit rushed and the grammar could have used some work as have sentence quotations with their marks side by side with another sentence of the same time, another speech section that is, is a bit awkward. The story on the other hand was a bit offensive when it comes to views on women Digimon or not, but still good for a laugh on some people's ignorance meaning Lobomon and a bit of Mercurymon.
Ah, an old classic of this site, well it is good to see stories worth reading from the early years of the program and to see some hints to franchises that were part of my childhood such pleasant memories. Hopefully more will be built up from this onward as it has for the 10 years since this was published.
I find it impressive how far this interactive has gone, so many choices and chapters. And it makes me wonder why so many other good inter-actives have not reached this level. Well hopefully you'll inspire others to reach to your glory, well keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for more.
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