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Review by Lyssa Basfords Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Once upon a time, there was a goldfish. Her name was Sara. Everyday, new fish were taken from the pet shop to live with humans. One day, a little girl walked in with her mother. She fell in love with Sara. Because of that, the girl took Sara home. Sara lived in a huge tank on the girl's desk. Sara lived happily, and in comfort. Until finally Sara died.
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Review by Lyssa Basfords Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem, and in my mind it can describe how people that go down a wrong path are afraid or unable to make it right.
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Review by Lyssa Basfords Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought that this story was interesting, but at the same time confusing. How did your son turn in to a frog, and a unicorn? Apart from this, I feel like it was well written and worth my time to read. Thank you!
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Review by Lyssa Basfords Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think that this work is well written, and easy to relate to for most. I think that the way you think about it is genuine and truly heartfelt. This would not be the kind of story that I would usually read, but since I found it, I might start reading these types. Thank you for your contribution to the book world!!!
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