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Review of This is My Cry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
well, actually, i really liked the lyrics of the song...
i just didn't like the video. it's like koreanovela that the song didn't fit with the action of the lips of the singer. lol. anyways, this video is not counted with the rating thing :D

i admire how you created this song, it's so meaningful and...
yeah? just beautiful.


god work! i liked it a lot.
keep writing--
EsP :D
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Review of Miss You  Open in new Window.
Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
i liked the message of the poem.,
though you did not write something which is long,
still, you made it as one of the best
which shows in the way it's written.

keep writing..
hope to read more from you,.

EsP :DD
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Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
i liked your poem...
actually, i enjoyed reading it because of its story. :D

keep writing!
EsP
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Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
i love the concept; the idea..and the way it's written.
---->very dramatic. :D

keep writing!
EsP
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Review of One More Memory  Open in new Window.
Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
hell0 sir!!
how are ya doin' lately? :P

ok, i read your poem...
and, honestly, almost cried with the words that you used...
but no, of course., i did not.
just almost. :D

i like that it is dramatic and emotional as what with the lyrics of the song is.

and again, i must say...
"you're really good at writing, huh?" :P

good work. i loved the poem.


---and, 'have been stalking around to read more from you, :))


take care..and GB
EsP
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Review of Orion's Keep  Open in new Window.
Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
you're really good at writing, huh? xD

and just my favorite part,
"Gold eluded me; I found nary a flake.
All I discovered was empty heartbreak."\

good work!
keep writing!
EsP
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Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
i thought there was a story behind...:D
anyways, i just loved this part...,
"One of my dreams as been to write novels about things that no one has ever read about before.
And the greatest part about it is that you can be someone who isn't you. "

I must admit that I'm also "hoping" for that time to come...
but, as for me, it's just about the way you think...
when you're writing, you do not think about yourself, what you would like to write but,
what the reader have thought about what you've written.

i was pulled over by the title...
and, okay, i will wait for your story. xD

thanks,and keep writing!
EsP
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Review of Once Upon  Open in new Window.
Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
uhm..i like the concept of this poem...
once upon sumthing....

but, uhm...
i just didn't somehow like the last part....<no offense>
it kept me waiting for an answer which never comes.
i dunno if you really intend the reader to wonder for that answer,
that the ending depends upon the perspective of the reader.

but over all, i liked it.

thanks!
keep writing...
EsP
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Review of Driftwood  Open in new Window.
Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
okay..i liked the last part where you said, "to build a dream along the sea..."
i can say that with you're words, you are imaginative and artistic,.
:D. write on. EsP
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Review of To Adam From Eve  Open in new Window.
Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi! A good poem...
Been looking around for this kind of poem, :D
Hope to read lots from you, :)

I liked how this poem was written...
---- No weak points seen.

Keep writing! :D
EsP
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Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
am i qualified to join the contest?
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Review by Estopia Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
i like this a lot
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