I would say to first find out who you are before and then you will know what you are looking for in life and in someone.I would then advise to reread your poem and fix some of the errors. But other then that, it was good.
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I understand the struggle of writing and feeling as though no one is watching or reading your words. But this place will show you that you are being heard. I liked what you wrote. The struggles and the thought of never giving up. Which is a good thing. Never give up. I'll tell you this, even if no one reads my stories I will leave them to my family. A little piece of me that they will always remember me by, and that is worth writing about. Never give up and good luck.
Hello. What a sad story about a girl that never feels enough. I liked it. The poem demostrated what she feels and how she is dealing with it. very good. keep on writing.
Hello, cute story. I really like it. the only thing I am concern about is "Time was running out" I believe its Time is running out, Not sure if that will disqualify you? Good luck! keep on writing.
this is a cute story! all you really gotta do is eat morderation and exercise. losing weight is something that takes time. especially for woman. anyhow. i liked how this went. it kept my interest. keep on writing.
Hello, I really liked your poem. It was written with well words to describe the incident of the matter. Love is dying and this person is willing to fight till the end. as we all do for the one's we love. it if it means to endure some toxicity along the way. The point is not to get lost in the process. Keep writing.
I liked how you managed to keep my interest. the writng was very intricate, unraveling itself to the conclusion that the reason why everyone was running around was beacuse of narrator. Was not expecting that. Keep on writing.
This reminds me of Noah's ark, type of situation. THere is always hope at our darkest hour. Even if we cannot see it at the time. Good poem. I liked it.
Ah, hope. The true villain in the story. I know because I was once there. Good thing that veil falls off and we discover the truth. Nothing wrong with hope but reality eventually kicks in. Good poem. It hit a memory in my past and for that its a good one. Keep on writing.
You story seems interesting to read. However, it is hard to read it since there are a lot of typos. I would advise you to re-read it and make the changes.
talk about the hard life. i have been there myself. this spoke to me and about my journey in life when i was young. I would recommend that you spell check this peom as well with the typos. Good story but with all the typos it takes u out of the story.
Hello, I liked your story. or poem. It kept my interest. However, I would recommend that you take a moment and edit your work. There are a few typos and there are missing words. That is the only thing that took me out of the story. I see the potential.
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