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Review by Akro Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Beautifully rendered. couldn't have been a better ending. all of it so touching. somehow i am reminded of a wonderful urdu couplet...

ho chuka qata ta'lluq to jafaaein kyun hon
jinko matlab nahi rehta wo sataate bhi nahi

(when we've broken all ties, why the torments
when there is no motive, there shouldn't be agony either)

keep going bud. Life's but a moment's spur. you cant really remember anything. it goes away in a blur. what matters is, will others remember you? remember THAT! *Wink*
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Review by Akro Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
That's the thing with chaos, you know..... its FAIR!
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