Your poem brought tears to my eyes. I have 3 teenaged sons and try very hard to make up time I did not have when they were younger. I also like Cat Stevens song.
Suggestions to improve: Only one small thing: Blue is hard to read for my "older" eyes. Though the color says something about the mood of the poem.
Your last lines made the poem for me.
Les
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