This was very enjoyable to read. Well worded, descriptive enought to put me in the scene, but not over whelmingly so. I am a huge fan of sci fi and fantasy fiction, so you may have earned a spot in my heart permanently with this one. Any chance of expanding on this short story, or will it remain untouched?
I like this! Very straight-forward, but still flowery and descriptive. You made me imagine each kind of smile as I read each line. Keep up the good work, I can tell this came from the heart!
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