It was definitely an enjoyable read. I hope you keep working on it, you are on to an original and interesting storyline to be sure.
At first I didn't like being left in the dark about who the characters were, but understand what you were going for now. One thing is for sure, I am quite interested to know just how they managed to trap Death in the body of this Quinn fella.... and what happens next. Keep it up.
Hey man. I heard about this site from a fellow Infantryman while I was deployed in 06. I have not had much time since then to write anything or be active on here at all till these past few weeks, reintegrating into civilian life is quite the detail. However I bet you find plenty of time to write while you are there, and any time you get two or three hours on refit in camp Stryker or Victory or wherever the Godforsaken hell they drop your grunt arss, you just make sure to hit up the internet trailer and boot one of those M-16A1 toting POG Fobbits off of a comp and upload something for us to read brother.
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