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Review of The Fun House  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The title was very simple, apt and to the point.
I liked the picture; it added just the right amount of creepiness!
The plot of the story is very interesting, something anyone can relate to at some point in their lives.
All the characters were believable and well written.
The dialog flowed naturally and was precise.
Grammar was excellent; emphasis was placed on the correct words.
The description of the surroundings was very vivid.
This is a story I won’t easily forget!
Great work!
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Review of Dessert  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Short, simple, sweet!
It’s awesome, I loved the fact that it was so simply put but with a great punch line!
Leonardo da Vinci said “Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication”, I’d definitely say you nailed it!
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