wow. i really like your wording in this poem. it was very deep and i could feel how you felt. i also like the comparisons in this poem. i wish i could think of creative things like this... also, were you about to say i love you? or please dont go????
im not quite sure what to think about this one... and thats a good thing!!! I like ones that make me think...
Its a really good piece but im having some trouble decifering it. for some reason i think about a fire. i guess i associated "siren song" with "earth again takes all the gold"
I really like how a lot of people could relate to this poem. Although many people dont openly share their feelings about things like this, young lovers often feel this way.
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