I noticed 1 misspelling,(over-sized cat on te front). Other than that I really like this piece. I liked that you did not make God out to be a stuffy, over powering being. I especially like how you pointed out that at their base, all positive religions are trying to lead us to the same place. I wish they would figure that out and try getting along, instead of always trying to prove who is right. Nice work.
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