I noticed 1 misspelling,(over-sized cat on te front). Other than that I really like this piece. I liked that you did not make God out to be a stuffy, over powering being. I especially like how you pointed out that at their base, all positive religions are trying to lead us to the same place. I wish they would figure that out and try getting along, instead of always trying to prove who is right. Nice work.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/lbn13
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.07 seconds at 9:16pm on Nov 25, 2024 via server WEBX1.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
