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Rated: E | (4.0)
Lisa this is such a great poem for a starter. I got captured by the poem and the stylistic devices you also incorporated in the poem of a raging love story. However i would recommend you involve more rhythmic patterns and sounds to make the poem more and more interesting even to the first time poetry readers.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
CAPTIVATING
Purple Princess this is such a captivating story. You have plotted the story in order just correctly to capture the attention of the reader from the start to the end. Damien was such a gentleman in the story. Purple princess your story is so not only intriguing but also so interesting. Keep it up Princess.
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