Hi!
Your poem really touched my heart, I can feel your pain. My only suggestion is to add some description about how it feels when you have cried your eyes dry and screamed yourself silent. Very hard, I know, working on it myself. But those lucky people with no experience of tragic losses often doesn't know it's yet another stage in this kind of nightmare. Very good overall!
Take care
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