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Review by Melody Pearson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I am not an expert on poetry, but it seems to have a nice rhythm and flow. The rhyming works pretty well. I like the alliteration, but it sometimes trips me up when trying to read aloud and I really think poetry requires vocalizing.

The story effect is great in the first three stanzas. The fourth one is the turn around, but I felt like the final one wandered off into the weeds a bit in the last two lines.
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