Hahaha, wow; what a great story. No wonder it won. It's brilliant, very suspenseful and had me reading till the very end. I couldn't have predicted that ending, seriously. Well done, Bob. Hope all your works are as brilliant as this one.
I love the way you create suspense, cleverly misleading the reader, appealing to their natural and perhaps depraved inner cravings; so that they look forward to see how the professor will treat the young lady... and them boom! They have their jaw dropping; shocked that the depravity of the professor is worse than they imagined.
Bravo!
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