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Rated: E | (4.0)
Simplistic but earnest and so welcome!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It would have looked a lot better if set against warm and glowing evening sky with nothing else in between. Never mind the unsolicited advise! - Kuchanna
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Simple in conception but quite appealing. Full of tender feelings. Has captured the mood of the protoganists' position with sympathy and care. The images drawn for portarying them are beautiful. If the movement of the poem from yesterday to today and then to tomarrow were to be smoother it could have made greater impact. brevity and economy of words also would have made it sound much better. All the same, very satisfying to me, personally. Keep writing and posting. Best wishes,
-Kuchanna
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A few punctuation marks at the right places would have earned a higher rating. Sorry for sounding old fashioned. Clarity is always welcome. That doesn't take away anything from the noble sentiment so lovingly and beautifully put by the young pen. You have a keen eye and a warm heart. Keep seeying, hearing, smelling, feeling and writing as you go along. All the best.
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Review of How a Tear Begins  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Silently falls the snow unlike its noisy cousin the rain. It is truly a magical swell. Well, it is a 'warm' tear of joy indeed!
Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it.
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Review of Who am I?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very honest and insightful, I expected a more nuanced conclusion, though. Began well but petered off somewhat towards the end. Was that reference to a film star really needed. Aren't you something more than that made-up public icon? I am sure you are, and you know it!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice idea! Quite a philosophical discourse. Well written too. Perhaps you could have developped it further. Why not try even now?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fabulous work Dormael! I loved it. Fantastic imagination. Nicely told. Keeping the suspense in tact till the end made it a very curious tale. The twist at end was delectable. Keep it up!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Sorry Sherry, I stick to my earlier view. This one is wordy too. But it has a certain childlike innocence that appeals to the reader at the first glance.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Simple words, equally simple imagery. Isn't it wordy and rather simplistic? Could you bring in some subtlety and poetry to your lines please?
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Review of More About Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very spirited presentation. The gay abandon is endearing. Bravo.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Truely, love is that grace that overflows from even the biggest cup. I liked the images of rain drops and the eagle in flight. You have the poetic muse. Only, you need to perhaps stay with it longer.
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Review of smile  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Simple words humble ways, very endearing!
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Review of Bits of Irony  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Three vignyettes of the same life; life of a woman of substance. Beauty, brains and bonds define her. Each has a tasty twist towards the end that makes you cry, cheer or admire. skillfully crafted. Full marks!
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Review of Journeys  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting new form! First four lines are enticing. The way it begins hooks you but sadly, along the way it loses steam. May be going back to root of the concept again will work. Needs a good try.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Honest, and brave too! Keep it up.
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Review of Shimmy and Roscoe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Twist at the end! Good. Liked it
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Review of The Devil  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Lovely! Thoroughly enjoyable. Romantic too! What a nice idea for a girl one loves and loses for no particular reason.
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Review of The Void  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I got curious about the three, only three, unrated items of your port and went through. I liked all of them though I have only rated them. Lucid lines. Poignant feelings but simple words. They can sound simplistic too if verse is not weaved more deftly.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Inviting warmly, guiding gently and making you feel at home in just a few moments. Splendid!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Fluent, racy and funny without being self conscious. Very vivid for an anecdote. Incidentally, did you notice the change in the value system since then? What a 'celebrity' or 'a society girl' wouldn't have done today to contrive such a thing for her admirers( that includes the media!)?
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Review of Before You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Genuine and tender expression. Sounds simple but appeals to the heart. Nice effort.
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Review of Rock Bottom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Full of faith and hope. Very positive in outlook. Lucid style. But, but... length is an issue. It's Wordy. I would liked it better if it were written more crisply.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very thoughtful of you indeed. Full of practical tips and useful info. Thanks
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Breezy style, easy on the eye, sweet to the ears, a lovable tale of 'love at first sight'! No wonder it won the prize. Well deserved indeed.
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