I am not going to claim to know exactly what you are going through. Nor am I going to tell you that everything will be ok, and that you can do so much better than him anyways. It always annoyed me when somebody said those things to me. The truth is, everything isn't ok, and you just want to shout that in their faces. I respect the feelings you are going through, and I think this poem was an excellent way to vent. I always write when I am sad or angry, because the paper (or computer) is the best listener. It doesn't judge you, or tell you to get over it. Your writing flows nicely. I look forward to reading some more of your work.
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