Wow. You had me gripped from start to finish. This plot drew me in closer and I truly felt as if I had been flung into the tale, your choice of wording made me sadder for the child, and you honestly memorised me at every single line, I felt joy and pain at this tale, I utterly enjoyed this, I would advise this to every avid reader AND writer, brava!
This poem was very good, your use of adverbs in addition to your rhyming couplets made me want to read on, the end to this was very nice also. Good work!
This madlib was very good, despite a few flaws at the start of the sentance. When I created my madlib, I enjoyed reading the story about my favourite Twilight characters and I truly enjoyed it. Bravo!
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