I am touched enough by your writing to not know how to respond. It was stark, it was sad but painted a clear picture of a strong and determined woman. I knew what was coming and yet I dreaded it. Your words were tight and descriptive, with the dialogue and actions proving apt support. I can't think of anything I would have done differently. Kudos on a great job.
P.S. If this was a real experience for you, my sympathies. It is hard but your strength is evident and would have served well to carry you through.
LOVED the descriptions! Each one is a treasure and delight! You have an observant eye, albeit a certain dark way of looking at things. The result is intense, overpowering almost. Perhaps because I read so many together, I almost need to stop and breathe! The giggling cloud was one of my favorites :)
Thanks for your review - just posted something new!
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