Hah. Pretty good. I love these little short pieces. I'm sure you've read Hemmingway's six-word story, "Baby shoes: For sale, never worn"
I might have to check out that contest myself.
Some people might complain about the dead narrator thing here, I suppose, but I've never had a problem with it. I've written a couple dead narrator stories myself. It is, after all, you writing the story, not your character.
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