Very nice story! I like the idea very much. How did you come up with it? A suggestion: there are some places where I'd put commas, such as "How long Midnight?"; also, I really like how clearly you show Lady Vaulda's personality.
I'd appreciate it if you could review my story in return: https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/211...
Very nice job!
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