All of these stories are impressive with their detail in such a short story. What is the most impressive to me is that they all have no repeating words. I don't think I can do that but I am now inspired to try. The only one I wasn't sure about was Price of Passion, though it was well done it just made me slightly uncomfortable but that is my own deal and not the writing at all. I wonder if there are any more like this out there.
This story is very cool because it really does tell a whole story in only a few short lines. I can see it all. A longer story may not have been able to as completely convey the core of storyline that this did. I am impressed. I think I may try to write a short 100 word story that has no repeating words. I am not sure I will be able to do such a good job but you have inspired me to try with this entry.
I think this was a very interesting exercise. It was descriptive and succeeds in drawing you in but you do it without repeating a single word. Amazing. I don't think I could manage that no matter how long I tried. I, for one, do not think this would be an easy task. It was well done and I am impressed. I am off to read more like this.
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