An inciting read I certainly hope there is more to come from this. I love the amount of detail in the story making me feel as though I was there seeing it for myself.
The poem is well thought out standing in one theme. Though in some places there is a lack of what the mind fills in such as some punctuation and missing words that the mind wants to fill in. For example "soul less eyes reflect Absence of life" my mind reads it with the word 'the' between the lines. Though beyond that its well written and elicits deep emotions.
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