I enjoyed your sonnet. It was beautifully put together. I like the use of singing and playing music. I like the way you express your love. It is unique. Very well done! A+ in my book! :)
I really enjoyed this poem! You did a good job with this particular style. I like the imagery. I did see one place where I wasn't sure if this was an error or if you used the repetition on purpose.
"as we run away to the to the field of daisies "
You repeated "to the" and I think it sounds good repeated, but also if it weren't. I wasn't sure if you did that on purpose or not.
Thanks for sharing your work! I enjoyed reading it! :)
I love this poem. The short and simple nature of it calls out to me. I can feel the emotion and the longing for your lover in your words. I especially love the strength of your final statement "I awake with outstretched arms." I can really connect to this poem, especially with my current situation! Thanks for sharing!
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