This is a great short poem that does an excellent job of following the prompt provided. The three stooges are a great pick for a famous partnership and this poem captures their essence very well. The trio were definitely known for their slapstick humor and eye pokes and the poem even manages to to touch upon their recognizable appearance. It also manages to successfully cover their essence within the brief 8 lines allotted. I also liked how it mentions the audience reaction to their performances. Trio really did make the people watching them laugh and smile. They were a lot of fun to see in action.
On a technical level the poem is set up well with an abab couple of stanzas. It makes it very fun for the reader to progress through. My favorite set of rhymes in this was the word hypnotic with chaotic. There is also a very nice rhythm in the poem with the syllable count matching between each of the couplets.
This is a really well done octet that I enjoyed reading very much. Thank you very much for sharing it.
This is a good October memory which follows the prompt providing a favorite October experience. It is hard to find a happier memory than the birth of a child. There is an interesting experience used for the basis of this memory. It could probably be expanded on a little bit more to make it more interesting to share with the reader. Even the entry describes the experience as having more to tell. As a reader I was left wondering why the doctor chose not to induce labor. I also felt you could have gone into a little bit more detail about the aftermath of the birth. I know that the blogging format allows the writer to share materials at their own pace and it does leave the groundwork for an interesting future follow up entry. It is still a good use of the prompt.
I like this entry. The opening is new knowledge to me. I've always wanted to read "The Merry Wives of Windsor but was never able to get around to it yet. Being a punctual person is a great quality to have. It helps to drive a person forward and shows the person to be really organized. Thank you very much for sharing this.
This is a really good entry. I agree with the premise that writing out one's goals is an important step on the road to success. This is ambitious list as there are a lot of goals on it. 17 goals are a lot to manage and maintain all at once. The nice thing about listing your goals out is that it organizes your thoughts and gives you a direction to go in. The more detailed they are the better you can plan them out. In this regard your list is very strong. You were able to get incredibly specific of what you wanted to do so that so that is a great start.
The downside of listing so many goals out at once it might cause you to bounce around between them as when you are focusing on one goal on the list you'll feel the need to switch to other neglected goals. It can also make you feel unnecessarily frustrated. Completing 10 things in one day on a daily basis is a lot for anyone to handle. It is important to recognize that. Try to boost your morale with smaller accomplishments than the full list. If you managed to accomplish 1 or 2 goals on the list treat it as a success. Conversely if you make progress in 5 or 6 goals on your list even if none are fully completed that should count as a success too because you are moving forward with multiple goals at once.
You might consider identifying goals in the set you want to prioritize within a certain day then secondary stretch goals to do when the primary ones are accomplished. For example with my habit list. I have 2 relatively simple goals as my daily ones and the more challenging goals I try to space out within the week. I also mark down when I went above the required amount. It helps me to build momentum off of the accomplishments.
Anyway this is a great written out entry and internal analysis. Best of luck with the goals you are attempting!
I really like this poem. It feels like it is written from a Wolf's perspective and really captures the essence of the creature. I totally picture the animal moving silently and energetically through the night and howling as it prepared for a hunt as I was reading this. It was very exciting and intense to read through. The word choices were really good, each stanza gave a good visualization of what was occurring. Thank you for writing and sharing this. I love the title as well.
You are on the right website for this type of Poem. A lot of the people here can relate to writer's block. There poem has a really good analogy. The description of being trapped in a dark closet with a huge immovable block of granite is extremely apt. I also like how the subject of the poem is able to find a way out of this while closing his eyes. I connect with it as often when I'm stuck on ideas resting up and closing my eyes often unlocks my writer's block as well. Very nicelyt written
This was a very well written short. I like the way Chloe's point of view was setup allowing the reader to picture what was going through Chloe's mind and the thoughts she was having when her sister came to her. The reader is really able to sympathize and follow the character's thoughts. She comes off as a smart character as she makes decisions and analyzes what is happening and future outcomes while giving advice to her sister in the moment at the same time. The reader is given a good sense of Mia as well and feels for her character. It is a really exciting read and I would love to read the story that this is a prequel to.
This was a challenging quiz. I have watched all the Buffy episodes but was only able to get 6 out of 14 (some of which may have been luck). There were only a couple of answers I was sure of. To be fair the series goes back several years but I am not doubt I would have been able to get some of these even if I had watched the episodes more recently. I definitely would not have been able to remember stuff like the addresses. These were great questions that would really test the knowledge of even the most hardcore Buffy fan. Nice job making this.
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