This was fun read. I like romantic stories and this definitely was sweet. It seemed to follow the prompts of the Lodestar contest very well. I like the cruise setting. Both of the characters written in this were very likeable and distinctive making them them enjoyable to follow. As a reader I found myself connecting with and rooting for Tiffany hoping that the romance would work out well for her. It was a very sweet ending and I was happy that everything worked out well for the pair. Thank you very much for writing and sharing this story.
Great entry. I think this prompt fits the contest it is written for very nicely. You expanded on what the picture provided and gave a vivid description of a story behind the picture. It fits nicely with the theme provided from the image. I really like that it managed to capture a child's wonder in the opening. If I was reading this hook, it would inspire me to want to read the rest of the story it was written for. This is really well done. Thank you so much for sharing it. Best of luck with your writing and Happy new year.
Nice image. I think it would be cool to visit this zoo. I would love to see the Koalas. They don't have them available in the zoos nearby where I live.
wow... nice story. The prompt seemed like it really challenging combining Christmas with a Zombie attack but it feels like you were able to pull it off really well. You made a fun set of characters and lead for this story. The combination of Christmas research and magic lead to wild result. It was a very exciting story to read. I also really liked the resolution. The Snow Golem using Snowballs to counter the zombies made for a really exciting climax. It was a lot of fun to read. Thank you very much for sharing it.
This is a very thought provoking question that the entry explores. I have never read "The Greatest Miracle in the world" but it seems like it would be good to read through.
It is interesting to think that just by being here that is a miracle in and of itself as just being able to be alive already managed to beat several odds. It is also comforting to think that there is a divine power guiding us.
I agree with you on the idea that we have free will to a certain extent as I feel like a lot of outcomes are possible from the choices we make. The final opinion shared is a hopeful one. I like to believer that God is guiding us with the hand that we've been given.
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Happy new year! 
Great Winter Hanukkah image. 
Best of luck with your writing and Happy new year. 
