This is a really interesting blog entry. Your feelings on A.I. are very similar to mine. I feel like it is a valuable resource and a lot of good can come from it. You give a very good description on how society is changing to adapt new technology. I feel that A.I. can really speed up tasks and be used to build things much quicker. At the same time its quite scary how much is affected by this technology. There is so much that is automated currently and A.I. has been shown to be able to do a lot. It does seem at times where we are reaching a dystopian future where A.I is completely replacing humans. I agree that there are a lot of challenges ahead as technology and A.I becomes more prevalent in our future. The closing two words that you used to describe your thoughts "Mixed Feelings" sum up a lot of peoples feelings on A.I as well.
Very thought provoking article and Analysis. Thank you so much for sharing it!
Nice poem. I like triple rhymes that each of the stanzas possessed. A lot of poems tend to go with two rhyming words but three makes it more impressive. The poem has a sweet message where the prize valued is time with the person that the poem is directed towards. As a reader it felt comforting and nice to reader. Since the poem had a rhyming element to read. I think this could have been enhanced further with matching syllable counts either between the lines or stanzas. It is fine as freestyle though and was enjoyable to read as is. Good writing!!
This is a good short story that follows the prompt provided. I never heard of Wattle day before so it is good that there is an explanation for it in the notes. The fact that it was written for Writing.com 25th birthday makes it fun to look 25 years further into the future. The story has sort of a sweet tone to it as a conversation between the site's founders highlight how much the site has grown over the years. This story works well in this community because the readers here are familiar with the people featured in the story as well as the site itself and are able to appreciate it much more. Thank you for writing and sharing your story.
This is a very good article. I really liked reading the answer to the first query regarding communication with God. It is very well thought out and pulled me into the rest of the questions for this. I definitely agree that Prayer is a form of communication. It is a good analysis. I like how your answers touch upon positive qualities intended to be included with communication such as Empathy and Sincerity. You also do a really good job of tying in your analysis with biblical passages. Your answers are thought provoking and very insightful.
Beautiful eagle picture. I really like the eagle on the branch. It looks really formidable and makes for a very cool signature. It is unfortunate that I missed the store that that this was attached to. Judging from this graphic. It seemed like it had some good images available in it.
This is a good story. I am curious to know what the prompt was for this. It is written pretty well. I like the first person perspective used and the narrator has a personality that is easy for the reader to connect with. The reader is able to understand the main character's situation and sympathize. The pacing was good making it smooth to read through. Readers are able to get a sense of each of the characters in it. The story doesn't go into heavy detail about how the two people would have interfered or the background of the lead so readers tend to side with the narrator. It works well with the twist ending as the reader comes to realization that maybe it is better to let things play out at the same time the narrator does. It was a nice surprise.
There are a couple of tweaks I recommend:
That how someone else wanted to be with her friends was her problem, not theirs.
They'd been hatching an elaborate plan right until when the party broke upoccurred.
I thought their plan would bring about more trouble thatthan it would solve
Given that the story is told in first person perspective using H & I as an abbreviation is confusing because 'I' is a pronoun that could also refer to the narrator. It took a couple of rereads to clarify it referred to Imogene. I wouldn't recommend using I as an abbreviation for this story.
Overall this is a fun story and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you very much for writing it.
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