This is a straight to the heart straight from the heart and to me gut wrenchin "Oh I so know it and so feel it" hate to say it truth! The words you have written are the emotions I feel or have felt, wait a minute, I don't know exactly. I am now more confused. Yeah! I love these type of poems. The ones that make you think, maybe more than you should.
Nice poem, with a very calming soothing energy. With this poem you bring to others the ability to rest. For you this poem should bring to you a sense of accomplishment. Very well done, I can feel your emotional comfort as I read your words. Sounds as if some one actually is concerned and cares. That itself can be soothing enough, a sense of comfort can rock any body to sleep.
I can relate to the rejection how hard for you that must have been. That is why I write for I hate the rejection. Kudos to you bro for expressing your true feelings! I think the poem is great!
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