Fantastic idea. Not many FNaF items are seen around, so this is really cool. Additionally, you can choose what happens or retell the stories. Very enjoyable and creatively original base. Not sure when this was posted, maybe you should learn a little more about the stories and that will give you more ideas. Love it.
This is a really great reflection of the movies. The 4-6 may not be my favorite (1-3 is my fav) but it is still great. Great use of words and it could be inspirational to other people. If you write one for maybe the new or older ones, you may get some more views.
I feel like this needs a little work. If you could complete at least one line for someone to read and understand what you want, I think it would go smoothly. As of now, there isn’t much to do, at least for the paths I did. It has a similar title to one my favorite episodes of the Pokemon franchise and I like that. Once again, great job but it needs some more work.
Impressive work on this story. You turned technology into a very creative storyline. Cliffhangers, strangely, are one of my favorite endings so that’s why I enjoyed it as well as the lifelike detail added in to make it seem like a normal day. Very well done. However,
I really enjoyed this. It reminds me of a HOOKED story. (Ya know, from the app?) The upside is that there’s is no reading limit, so it’s a cool series. Love the story line, using the Grin (Grim?) Reaper as an antagonist. It’s creative and that’s what I enjoy.
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